All righty! :3 I see a lot of potential here! i really like the sketch feeling and i like the ''Haha i'm cool'' pose Hmm Hmm! i really like it! so i give you a 4 in vision
However everyone use this pose D: You know what? maybe you can change the inclination of the viewer, I'm sure you know what i mean -w- but not everybody uses a Cartoon-stylized Manga Style (YES! it exists! ) So i give you a 2.5 in originality
In technique i guess you can be a lot better <3 Let's see, Your character need a center (Sorry, i don't know the proper name cuz i speak spanish and not english D:<) Uuuummm... i don't know how to explain it properly, but your character looks like she is flying or levitating or something like that... she looks off the floor
Practice your human anatomy and stuff! I give you a 3 on Technique <3
On impact i give you a 4, since when i saw the drawing i was like ''Ohhh! loook how cute! <3''
My only comment is that hmmm if you actually have the diligence to draw 100 body or more you'll be perfect. Not that this is bad, but it certainly need a lot of improvement. I got friends who draw like you who later beat me in drawing so I think i'm going to see another one here JUST DON'T GIVE UP AND KEEP DRAWING, that's what matters in art XD
I like the skeleton you made. it look dearly accurate and is a great start, but when you drew you didn't follow your excellently made skeleton. But, just seeing you drew this way makes me smile because it shows you are going to improve vastly
Intresting, they looks a little off balance because most of their mass is to the right of the feet, like the picture is tilted. Hands are a little overly simle, but you manged to keep them expressive despite that.