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manga sketch 1 by Apocalypse1415 manga sketch 1 by Apocalypse1415
Just trying out my new anatomy design. Hope you like it.
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All righty! :3
I see a lot of potential here! i really like the sketch feeling and i like the ''Haha i'm cool'' pose Hmm Hmm! i really like it! :D so i give you a 4 in vision :D

However everyone use this pose D:
You know what? maybe you can change the inclination of the viewer, I'm sure you know what i mean -w-
but not everybody uses a Cartoon-stylized Manga Style (YES! it exists! :D)
So i give you a 2.5 in originality :D

In technique i guess you can be a lot better <3
Let's see, Your character need a center (Sorry, i don't know the proper name cuz i speak spanish and not english D:<)
Uuuummm... i don't know how to explain it properly, but your character looks like she is flying or levitating or something like that...
she looks off the floor

Practice your human anatomy and stuff! :D
I give you a 3 on Technique <3

On impact i give you a 4, since when i saw the drawing i was like
''Ohhh! loook how cute! <3''

Keep on your fantastic works! :)

Have a Nice day!
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ARSONicARTZ Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My only comment is that hmmm if you actually have the diligence to draw 100 body or more you'll be perfect.
Not that this is bad, but it certainly need a lot of improvement. I got friends who draw like you who later beat me in drawing so I think i'm going to see another one here =D
JUST DON'T GIVE UP AND KEEP DRAWING, that's what matters in art XD
Apocalypse1415 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok. Thanks. :)
ChibiZilla Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like the skeleton you made. it look dearly accurate and is a great start, but when you drew you didn't follow your excellently made skeleton. But, just seeing you drew this way makes me smile because it shows you are going to improve vastly :la:
Apocalypse1415 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well... thanks. I'm just practicing. :)
ChibiZilla Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like it though . u .
Oops-WrongUniverse Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Intresting, they looks a little off balance because most of their mass is to the right of the feet, like the picture is tilted. Hands are a little overly simle, but you manged to keep them expressive despite that.
Champ243 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It feels very cartoony for a manga sketch. I could see this as potential lucky star OC, if the eyes were drawn in and the blue lines removed.
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