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Apocalypse The Killer By Thathentaiguy by Apocalypse1415 Apocalypse The Killer By Thathentaiguy by Apocalypse1415

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Character by :iconapocalypse1415:

The few problems that I see in this picture are that it is very visible that the background and the actual person are from different places. (Anime vs. real world) also though I don't know what kind ok look you are going for in this photo, she seems tired and kind of synical. Possibly you could also make the hair fuller that would give the girl some well needed life. Also her shoulder kind of look flat at the top the curve is to hard for the girl. I'm not trying to be mean as I really do like the photo but she could also use a little more tone difference in her clothing whether you do that through coloring or shadowing is up to you. Thank you for asking my opinion. It really is well done though. -Soul
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I see how you focused on the actual character, the colors m simple and deal with the personality. I'd work on the design more though, its very important to match the cloths to the personality. even the advertisements point out that it IS important because cloths express their personality. other than that, I think its awesome! ^-^
other items I the picture attracted my attention, such as the eyes, the color could use some shading and to be angled a bit differently. Base keep up the wonderful practice at sketching an shaping, along with practicing to make the back ground fit in with the person
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uberbomb Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cool !!! 
DemonShirley Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So Cool C:
luvaddict77 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like the detailed background.  I'm terrible at that sort of thing for the most part.  Nice job.
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January 23, 2014
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