This is my first Critique so I'll be honest! I really LOVE your style, it's very cute. Through I think some of the colors are off a bit, Red is the whole color right now and you have bits of colors here and there, I think you need to balance the color scheme out. For example, you have little bits of pink in the whole image and only a few blues and greens. The red dominates the whole image and that's why I think you need to balance your colors out. Sorry If my view is weird of critique is weird.